AFTER CLASS CRITIQUE

With regards to assignment 3: visual story, my classmates all felt that the first picture should be a more zoomed out picture of the couple.

I might have to take clara and wei wen wearing black, so that the second picture would not be a giveaway.

They also commented on how the forehead shot looked like a giveaway of a guy's forehead. In actual fact, it is clara's forehead. This is pretty funny.

I plan to change the colour of the hairband and retake that shot, leading the audience more into thinking that it is a female cook. the remaining pictures, i'll just try to use photoshop to colour it in!

Cant wait for all the assignments to be done!